User:Jacob k 2022/Counseling psychology/Ccurry24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jacob k 2022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Jacob k 2022/Counseling psychology - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Counseling psychology - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead seems to cover the article well and concisely. The content added is a great way of updating the outdated information. It also improves on grammar throughout the updated data. You also added a lot of great information in Career counseling section! However, there are parts in that section that have minor issues like two spaces in-between words so I would advise just looking through it for that type of stuff. To do with the references, they seem to work appropriately. There is only one image in the article, so if you would like to add more to illustrate, feel free to do so. Overall, you did a great job adding more information, that seem to be from recent, reliable sources. There are a few issues like the spacing and grammatical type issues, but you did a good job definitely. Also, I found these issues by using Grammarly if you want to try that out!