User:Jacob k 2022/Counseling psychology/Irvingca Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jacob k


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jacob%20k%202022/Counseling_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Counseling psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content of the drafted changes are relevant to the article's topic; however, I believe there may be one section that could be moved elsewhere in the article. The statement by the National Board of Certified Counselors could be placed after the section about personal relationships with clients. Everything in the draft seems to be very well written with regards to neutrality; there are no points where I feel that a bias is being presented. In the section about how COVID-19 has affected counseling, I believe the last two sentences may be presumptive; however, if a citation were added there, then that would dispel any of that. The sources you have chosen are reliable, current and diverse; however, I feel that perhaps there should be more citations overall throughout the article. Everything in this draft is fairly well written; the only discrepancies I have noticed are small grammatical errors that can be fixed with time. Other than the one aforementioned section from the National Board of Certified Counselors, the article is organized extremely well and leaves little room for misinterpretation. Overall, I think these are great additions. Keep up the good work.