User:Jacob k 2022/Counseling psychology/Lindseyfturner106 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Jacob k 2022)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jacob%20k%202022/Counseling_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Counseling psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is all relevant to the original article as the added information does involve counseling psychology. The added sentences on "Counseling Ethics and Regulations" helps fill in some of the gaps that the original article was missing in regards to regulations in the counseling world. The additional section that was added at the bottom of the draft discussing the effects COVID-19 has on counseling is a great addition and has many strong points but some of the words seem like "fluff" and I believe some of the sentences could be combined and shortened. Adding a section about COVID-10 effects is something I wouldn't have thought of doing so it was an interesting perspective to read.

Overall, the content that was added has strengthened the quality of the article and was all very organized and easy to understand. The links provided all work and are checked out to be reliable. I was wondering though if you are going to continue to add to the ethics section considering there are plenty of more regulations and ethical guidelines that could be discussed. Great additions, Jacob.