User:Jacobjia66/Chinese Doctors/Jarvanc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jacobjia66, Wenqi Zhang, Zyixuann


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jacobjia66/Chinese Doctors
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Jacobjia66/Chinese Doctors

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The introductory sentence includes an introductory sentence that clearly and concisely describes the topic. The lead does not include information that is not in the article. It can clearly describe the main parts of the article.

Content

The added content is closely related to the topic and is up-to-date. It does not include content that does not belong. All content is closely related to the topic. This article focuses on the context following the 2019 coronavirus outbreak in Wuhan. It also analyzes the characterization of the protagonist and the mission he or she has as a doctor, making it easier for the reader to understand the context of the movie.

Tone and Balance

The content added is neutral. All claims are very objective and not influenced by the authors' own biases or subjective understandings. The content does not try to convince readers to support certain positions, but simply tells them objectively about the plot and meaning of the film. There is no under-representation or over-representation of views.

Sources and References

The sources are reliable, references are from a blog published on Sinema's website in 2021, and the arguments and analysis in the material are valid for the film. However, more scholarly references can be found and added to further support these.

Organization

The content added is concise, clear, and easy to read. There are no grammatical or spelling errors. However, the structure of the essay could be further improved by using more subheadings.

Images and media

This manuscript does not include images that would enhance understanding of the topic.