User:Jacobjia66/Chinese Doctors/Yuhang Zheng Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jacobjia66 (Yixuan Zhang, Wenqi Zhang, Zeyuan Jia)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jacobjia66/Chinese_Doctors?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chinese Doctors
 * Chinese Doctors

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section is really well written as it provides comprehensive information on film Chinese Doctors. It does contain a sentence address the article’s top. However, the last sentence “This essay will make analysis of the film story plots and reflection of the film”. Here, I am not quite sure about the analysis part. As we are only required to find and organize information that are helpful for users. In other words, no analysis or personal argument are needed for this Wikipedia page.

The content is really well-written overall. In particular, the article provides a solid summary of the story plot, which is lacking in the current existing page of Chinese Doctors. The film is fairly new; therefore, the information provided here is quite helpful. However, the rest of article heavily concentrates on the analysis and reflection of the film, which might impact the neutrality of the article. I have checked the reference link, and it appears to be a good resource to use. However, it might be a good idea to insert citations in your article. It is plausible that there are not so many reliable secondary sources available for this newly released movie. I have found one article from Global Times titled “ ‘Chinese Doctors’ salutes Wuhan medical workers against COVID-19” by Ji Yuqiao. https://www.globaltimes.cn/page/202107/1228183.shtml. The article might be helpful to your project. For the images, it might be a good idea to include one or two more screen shot here.

Overall, it is a well-written article! Good job!