User:Jacobjia66/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Chongqing Zoo https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chongqing_Zoo


 * Article Evaluation
 * I don't think the article is complete. The content section is seriously lacking in the introduction of Chongqing Zoo. For example, how many different animal activity areas there are inside the park. In addition, China usually gives ratings to tourist attractions, and this rating influences to some extent the visitors' preference of the attraction, which I think the article which needs to mention. More than that, the article should also cover the history of the creation of Chongqing Zoo and how it has expanded step by step to its present size. One of the better things the existing article does is that his content is not biased and the whole article is in a neutral position. The literature section is not complete and uses documents from the same time without further follow-up and improvement.


 * Sources
 * http://www.cqzoo.com/cqzoo/zjdwy/second.html?_t=1643099815580

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Chen Xuanli https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chen_Xuanli


 * Article Evaluation
 * I think this article about Chen Xuanli is very briefly written. The introduction of the article lacks a description of Chen Xuanli's life, about his career. The quotes are too brief. By reading the quotes the audience cannot have a basic understanding of Chen Xuanli, but only know about Chen Xuanli's position. The content section does not have an effective story connection. The content section lacks the cause of the story and only tells the result about his killing of Yang Guifei. The In Fiction & popular Culuture section lacks a lot of film and television resources. In fact, there are far more film and television resources about Chen Xuanli than what is presented on the Wiki. Also, there is a lack of relevant literature and references.


 * Sources
 * https://min.news/en/history/c18264ef7fb0512ff64ab6dcd23ac421.html http://www.yanchengdj.com/renwu/4880.html

Option 3

 * Article title
 * My own Swordsman https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/My_Own_Swordsman


 * Article Evaluation
 * The quotation lacks a brief description of the movie. No brief description of the content of the film is written. The content section is completely devoid of any discussion about the content of the movie. I think the article needs to add an introduction to the movie, a separate brief introduction about the characters, an arrangement of the songs used in the movie and a record of awards related to the movie. This article is missing too much relevant content and has huge room for development. There are still some errors in the article, such as the director's name is Jing Shang instead of Shang Jing.


 * Sources
 * https://sino-cinema.com/2016/06/13/review-my-own-swordsman/ https://books.google.co.jp/books?id=x5YqEAAAQBAJ&pg=PA5&lpg=PA5&dq=My+own+Swordsman+introduction&source=bl&ots=vWqBunlxpY&sig=ACfU3U0Dbj6BEX-R7QwpfNsVCFTWbkq9Qw&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiy8r7Zgc_1AhXZAYgKHeP8Dag4ChDoAXoECA4QAw#v=onepage&q=My%20own%20Swordsman&f=false

Option 4

 * Article title
 * The Yinyang Master https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Yinyang_Master


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article quotation lacks a brief introduction to the film's content. I am very positive about the Synopsis in the content section, which is very detailed about the plot of the story. In addition, I think the cast section needs to add a brief characterization and character relationships. the soundtrack section is very detailed, down to every time stamp of the movie. This approach can be very convenient for readers to find the relevant resources. Moreover, I think the article could add some relevant information about the producers, such as story planner, directors of each group.


 * Sources

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Chinese Doctors https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_Doctors


 * Article Evaluation
 * The citation section of the article is very good. The reader can have a basic knowledge of the movie Chinese Doctor by reading the quotes. However, the content section lacks a description of the plot of the movie, which is an area in need of improvement. the Cast section is very comprehensive but lacks information about some of the actors' roles, such as Tong Liya playing Li Chenguang’s wife. The Reference section lacks credibility of some of the information and needs to be revised.


 * Sources
 * https://view.inews.qq.com/a/20210713A05UST00