User:Jacobnlloren/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Black Panther: Wakanda Forever (soundtrack)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose it because it looked interesting to me and the format is different from what I usually see so I wanted to look into it more.

Evaluate the article
Lead section

I think in the first sentence, you could immediately tell what the topic is about and it does describe everything that will be in the article. But some sentences also felt very long and wordy so they could try to break down the sentences better.

Content

The content covers everything about the soundtrack. There is 3 albums, so there isn't one sidebar with brief information on the right hand side in the top of the article, it's all in the albums section with 3 sidebars with all the brief information and it's interesting to see. They aren't too wordy about each album and the production section is also written well without doing too much.

Tone and Balance

The article is neutral for the most part but there is some parts where it feels like the writers/editors are guessing rather than actually knowing what happened. Like "Göransson worked with several musical archaeologists [...] and also went to Mexico City, to possibly recreate the sound of Mayan." The word possibly shows that they don't know for certain that that's why he went to Mexico City which is troublesome.

Sources and References

There's a lot of sources and references and for the most part, they're mostly from Billboard and other music industry websites, which is good for a page like this.

Organization and writing quality

Honestly, at first I hated the way it was formatted in that I would've liked the sidebars with the brief information in the top of the page like most pages, but I can understand why it was formatted like this. I just think the top of the page looks more essay-like than anything.Images and Media

The only images they had were the albums which is valid as having anything else would be confusing.

Talk page discussion

There's only one message which is about the grammar issues and the flow of the sections and I agree with it.

Overall impressions

Overall, it's an alright album article the main things needed to be changed are the grammar issues, keeping the article neutral, and trying to make each paragraph flow.