User:Jad Mada/Hinduism in India/Dilrajg2004 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jad Maa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jad%20Mada/Hinduism_in_India/Dilrajg2004_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hinduism in India

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The census stated in the first sentence of the article needs to be updated to the 2020 census, as it would effect the rest of the statistics stated in the article. Although the article does mention the Partition of India and how it effected Hindus, it overlooks the interaction between Hindus and people of other religions. There are many great sources that provide specific information relevant to the topic, however they should be updated to include the modern census and the Hindu dominated Indian Congress. Hindu oppression is very briefly discussed and left out of the history section. Since majority of the Indian Congress is Hindu, it would be ideal to include influential figures who were also Hindu. On the other hand, the article does an excellent job providing visuals of Hindu temples to indicate that Hinduism is widely available.