User:JadaClark2002/2000s/Jhernandez07 Peer Review

General info
Jada - @JadaClark2002
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2000s&oldid=1219454969
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):2000s

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Jada, I'm here to peer review.

Lead
There is not much to say about the lead. There hasn't been any updates to it but as far I can see it I do not think there any

Content
I think "celebrity" is a broad term in "celebrity death" in the section it talks about music artists death and it does not go further on other celebrity other than just music artists death.

In the fashion section you've talked about how the Y2K fashion was "built on hype surrounding the new millennium." I suggest you revise from "hype surrounding" to "the imminent arrival of the new millennium" I think this way it makes it sound more neutral.

Tone and Balance
Tone and balances managed to remain neutral and factual.

Sources and References
I don't know if it needs it or not but I think you should have citation surrounding Kelly Clarkson made chunky highlights fashionable.

Organization
Content is concise and clear.

Overall impression
Despite the few edits that is out there I think it is a good start I would say just to keep at it and good luck on the editing I know you are very busy.

Additional Question
I notice that you only have parts that you edited and not the whole article. Were we suppose do that?