User:Jadelyon/peerreview

El Salvador
User:GeeTheMan/sandbox

I appreciate that this student sectioned off each topic and has a general outline of how he or she is going to layout their content. Instead of going into the writing blindly, they had a guide of how they wanted to section off the information. Despite the organization, the student does only have one part filled out. Their content seems neutral, without any opines or insights which is exactly what should be done. They might need to look over a couple grammar errors, but the variance of sentence structure is nicely formatted. Lastly, I also like how they have their bibliography at the bottom for easy access and will add it in to the references section as they go on with their work. I would encourage them to also link other wiki pages to any difficult phrases or words. Overall, great start and I look forward to them adding additional information.