User:JadenGordon1/sandbox

== Article Evaluation ==
 * Many subgroups that provide links to different facts and information about something else related.
 * Different links to people involved or the history of different parts of the census
 * Up to 45 different references and all have links to where information was found.
 * They provide actual collections of data so readers can see a sample of what the census provides.

Population Change article review:
There is not much that is written on the Wikipedia page for Population Change so I plan to add a few things to the page. I want to talk about how the economics of each country have affected them differently or if it affects population change at all. Additionally, I want to talk about how population change has happened rurally and what that looks like compared to total population in more urban areas. Finally, I want to add to the page information on what population change could look like in the future and how that affects the united states.

Bibliography:
Natural Amenities Drive Rural Population Change

The Demographic Dividend: A New Perspective on the Economic Consequences of Population Chang

Projections of the Size and Composition of the U.S Population: 2014 to 2016
 * Sandbox Census bureau Questions

Population change article additions:
However, this visual example of each population raises questions on how countries compare to each other. Many countries have different shaped population pyramids which caused demographers to investigate. Population pyramid shape is due to the internal issues of a population such as: access to education, health care, industrialization, and access to natural resources. Another factor that affects population and how we calculate it are Tempo Effects. Tempo Effects are a wide arrange of phenomenon that can effect demographics and fertility rates. An example of a Tempo Effect could be war (such as the civil war) or genocide (such as the Holocaust). Tempo Effects can be looked at as forced changes in population but there are also errors in the census that can affect the population as well. There have been known errors in the census from country to country which lead to more inaccurate population pyramids. Errors include coverage errors in the census in the less developed countries as well as content errors from responses by those answering the question. Errors can lead to a lack of resources for a particular area which can lead to an increase in mortality as well as a drop in fertility. In addition, funding for areas would not be enough to sustain living if their count is not accurate due to error. As of Monday, March 26th, 2018, the Trump Administration has added a new question to the Census: Are you a citizen? Whether or not this is looked at negatively or positively it will change populations according to the Census Bureau. Peer Review

I like what you want to add to the Population Change article, I think there should be categories to separate the ideas, like have the Tempo Effects one variable of population change and so on. Maybe talk just go in to more detail about the different reasons why the population changes and you could even possibly go into how the population changes differently regarding the country. I really like the ideas you have and it's a great start.

The sections could look something like this...

Tempo Effects Effect the Population Change
Talk about why this can effect the population

Errors in Population Change
What the error are and why they occur

and etc.

-EmilyMoeller

My Reviews
I enjoyed reading over your article edit and I believe that you made the changes necessary. I noticed that you did not have much of a bias towards any of it which is what I think we are supposed to maintain throughout this! I like how you used percentages to enhance your data for the reader. Additionally, you used a few sources to back up those facts so that seems terrific! One of the few suggestions I can make is that maybe you can tie all of that information into one Major point and maybe have an example of it handy for the reader. This was it will be easier to connect with you and more people will understand even better.
 * Peer Review -Jaden Gordon

I believe that the first sentence is a run on sentence but I am not completely sure. I like the source that you provided for the high male unemployment as well as the fact that you bring in the extra fact that due to a high male unemployment, more Women are having to work. Centering the migration of working women mainly around the work and poverty aspect is a good idea, shows where the country is at. I think what could be added is the effect of what is happening and what the country and the individuals in the country are working towards. More sources could make your section more credible and give more background knowledge that we as the readers do not know about. Good job keeping the content neutral with no bias. It brings out more information and less opinion which is what I believe is looked for in this assignment.
 * Peer Review on JOrtz Additions to Women Migrant Workers from Developing Countries - Jaden Gordon