User:Jaditol/Beef noodle soup/Kris1019 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jaditol


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jaditol/Beef_noodle_soup?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Beef noodle soup

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Jaditol, I really like how you put those different types of noodles in Lanzhou beef soup, it really helps me shape a idea how those noodles might look like without looking at images. One thing I would like to mention is that may be more variety of noodle types can be included in the article. Overall great work! You are indeed making a lot of progress here!