User:Jaditol/Beef noodle soup/Simonek0929 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jaditol


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jaditol/Beef_noodle_soup?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Beef noodle soup

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * for the lead section, I think you can add more general information about beef noodle soup, such as why did people start eating eat, and why did it become a popular food in Asia.
 * the citations in the lead section is a little confusing. You cited 8 resources at the same time where there are only two citations in the original article. If you added more citations, make sure you add more information to your article
 * I like how you added different types of noodles in your article!
 * I think your overall structure is really clean, but make sure to include an outline of contents(like the one in the original article)
 * Nice job! The pictures definitely make me hungry~