User:Jaditol/Beef noodle soup/Zzzzzyfffff Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jaditol


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jaditol/Beef_noodle_soup?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Beef noodle soup

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello,

I really like the topic you chose to work on, and I think that you have a good start overall, as you have made efforts to enrich this article under the topic of variations. Your two paragraphs have a good structure and flow, and the contents you add are related to the theme and the topic. The tone is definitely neutral and shows no bias in personal opinion as demonstrated. Your writing is easy to read and understand, and no obvious typos or grammatical issues are found. Your language is clear, structured, and well-written. Moreover, the sources you include and use are reliable. And it is very well done to include in-text citations.

Here are the recommendations for changes that could be made: I see that the original article's title is "variations," and your content demonstrates one of the types of variations—Lanzhou beef noodle soup. So I highly recommend changing your sub-title "Different noodle styles" to "Different Lanzhou styles." In this way, fewer misunderstandings could be made.