User:Jae7419/Pedro Juan Soto/Dooley1836 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jae7419


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jae7419/Pedro_Juan_Soto?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pedro Juan Soto

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Make sure to add a lead to the article
 * Off to a great start on the sections you added!
 * Personal Life section :
 * I think you could introduce his family members before you mention the death of one of his son


 * Spiks:
 * Cautiva paragraph- I think you should capitalize the name "The Captive" each time you mention it
 * I think you have to rephrase the comment Yolanda Martinez-San Miguel made instead of quoting it (in the training modules it mentioned that quotations from copyright sources are against the guidelines
 * Overall great addition to the existing article!
 * It looks like you only included 5 sources so make sure to meet that 6 source requirement