User:Jae7419/Pedro Juan Soto/Guadalupequinones Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Jae7419)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jae7419/Pedro_Juan_Soto?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pedro Juan Soto

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I really like the breakdown of the sections which include: Personal Life, and Career, but I think there should be a sentence or two at the top of the page quickly describing who he was. From the other Wikipedia pages we have been seeing, it looks like most of them have it. I think it would be a nice addition.

In the Career section, I think you could expand a little bit on what the "Hispanic magazine" Revista Asomante published. I would be curious to know what type of work he wrote for the magazine. Was it centered around politics, identity, literature? .

Also, this line "Pedro published his first works on mainland hispanic journals such as the likes of Ecos and published stories in Revista Asomante, a Hispanic magazine." is repeated twice in this section. It could simply be a formatting issue, but I figured I would point it out.

During your section about Spiks, you mention major themes shared between these pieces, but I would be interested in reading more about specific struggles. Could this be referencing racial struggles between Puerto Ricans and another ethnic groups? It would help with the contextualization of his work.

In the "La Cautiva" section, I really like the last point about patriarchy and the suppression of female sexuality and think that you should expand this a bit. The dynamic of migration and gender is impactful especially considering the time frame.

In the "Garabatos" section, this line "the lack of financial support he provides for his family only steers this story in to a tragedy" seems subjective at first, but it could be re-phrased. Does this reference a hero tragedy, a death, or another type. I think being more specific could help with making this into a statement rather than an analysis.

I am excited to see what you include about the other works. This is so interesting!

In the references, there are five sources, and they are all properly cited as they are used within the piece. There are no images, so it is all okay! Good job! Let me know if you have any questions.

-Guadalupe Quinones