User:Jae7419/Pedro Juan Soto/Rafahorle Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jae7419

Link to draft you're reviewing

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jae7419/Pedro_Juan_Soto?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)


 * Pedro Juan Soto

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead has been slightly updated to add that Juan Pedro Soto was also a playwright and activist. However, it does not reflect the rest of the article so I would recommend writing a brief overview about the author.

Content

The content added is relevant and deals with Wikipedia's equity gap as it about a latin author.

Tone and Balance

The article maintains a neutral tone and does not try to convince the reader of any position. I think it does a particularly good job at writing about Soto's work without trying to analyze it.

Sources and References

The sources are versatile and range from essays, books to newspaper articles. The main issue is that all of the sources are at least over a decade old so I would recommend trying to find new ones. Finally, the sources reflects what the article says.

Organization

The content is organized and easy to read but there are some minor grammar mistakes. For example, in the section about Los Inocentes it says ".. mother is insistent that her remain quiet ... "

Images and Media

N/A

Overall Impressions

Overall, I believe this a good article. The sections about his novels are good as the author does not try to make his own analysis of Pedro Soto's work. I think it could be interesting to not only give a summary about the novels, but also write about the impact they had on Puerto Rican/Latino literature. Although I do not know much about the topic, I think the section about his career could be expanded and the lead needs more information.