User:Jaefle/sandbox

Article Evaluation
Article: Nutrition psychology

Notes:
 * There could be work on wording
 * Some repetitive information. Under nutrition psychology, overview, and objective, similar information that could be combined.
 * Little information for each topic
 * I think some of the topics were unnecessary
 * Article isn't biased
 * Sources support information
 * Dates are correct
 * On the talk page, edits were made to give more background information on the topic.
 * The article is in the scope of WikiProject Medicine and WikiProject Psychology. In WikiProject Medicine, it was rated low importance on the projects importance scale.
 * The article does give an overview of the topic and gets the point across, but I think more information could be added.
 * More information could be added on Origins and Development to get more of an idea of the topic.

Why Great Sharks are Still a Mystery to Us by Erik Vance.

Article Edit
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Composition_(visual_arts)


 * More background info in Elements of design
 * More info under Color and how it is an important part of visual arts
 * Principles of organization/ viewpoint can go under composition techniques
 * Phrase changes in Line and Shape
 * Examples for Line and Shape?
 * Doesn't talk about texture, value, form, and space under Elements of Design

Vetter's Feedback: Hi Jade - I think this could be a really interesting article to work on! I see you've got a couple sources, which look good, but I need to hear more about how you think the article could be developed. What are the specific things you think need work? What could be added, improved, revised? Is there a lack of balance in the article in terms of what's covered and what's not? I would recommend checking out the Talk page as there's a lot of good conversation there about how the article needs developed. We can also talk more during our conference about the types of sources that might be useful here. I'm thinking general information sources like textbooks might be especially useful. -Dr. Vetter

Link to article draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jaefle/sandbox/articledraft