User:Jaguilar2/Rosabeth Moss Kanter/Scout26 Peer Review

General info
Jaguilar2
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jaguilar2/Rosabeth Moss Kanter
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Rosabeth Moss Kanter

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like that the Personal Life section was moved to the bottom of the article. However, it is very small and could use more information even if it is just a few sentences. I think the introduction needs to be adjusted. It does not mention her management contributions at all. It would not need to be a full explanation of them just a small mention. Her management theory is what she is supposed to be known for. Overall, I do think most of the changes you made are good.