User:JaidenLMcK/Mariano A. Garcia-Blanco/Mariahl08 Peer Review

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JaidenLMcK, Ajohnson30, Paytonh14, Cayleeloft123!!!
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 * User:JaidenLMcK/Mariano A. Garcia-Blanco/Bibliography - Wikipedia
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 * User:JaidenLMcK/Mariano A. Garcia-Blanco/Bibliography - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are many sentences that start with the word "He". This is very informal and should be replaced with the name of the person. The sources used on this article is very accurate and relevant to the article. The article is well captioned and easy to understand. This article is very enriching.