User:Jaimekatz926/READ 180/M.Salvatorelli Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jaimekatz926


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jaimekatz926/READ 180


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think this is a really great start to an article. There is a clear organization of ideas and what appears to be an accurate number of links to support the content you are providing. While the writing, overall, is concise, there are two errors in spelling/grammar that I noticed, one in the first paragraph, the other in the fourth paragraph. The article also appears unbiased overall, however I do think the statement, "READ 180 gives students the tools they will need to improve their reading skills..." feels slightly biased, like you are trying to convince the reader of this. Maybe the addition of "Research has shown..." at the beginning of that sentence will change its tone. Lastly, while I do not think this is a necessary addition, I do think talking a bit more about what "culturally responsive" looks like in this context and how it is an important factor to the success of the program.