User:Jaimeneto17/The Lorax (film)/Ian F Whitman Peer Review

I think you've got a great start on this assignment. I think all the information you've shared is in a neutral tone, and informative while also interesting. I think you need to further elaborate on the ecological perspective for our class a bit, but the information present is definitely something I'd include as well. I don't think any of the information you've included is biased, but as far as I could see you haven't added any citations yet so I'd re-read the text and make sure it's all good as Wikipedia is super stringent with those sorts of things. It's been a while since I've seen the film, but I think it could be super cool to talk about the exotic wildlife featured in the film and how the process of regrowth in their ecosystem compared to real life.

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