User:Jake.dobson/sandbox

Article Evaluation

The article in place of my topic, inclusion (education), is very thorough and in-depth with a neutral tone displaying all sides of the argument. its evenly dispersed and not bias towards either side. the points are rather well presented to be to the point without being too short. All of the links work and of from a variety of sources, most being books. The sources are from all sides of the argument to provide knowledge on the perspectives. Overall, it is a strong article but there is probably a few additions in details that can be provided. The main discussion in the talk section is about further defining and describing parts of article. they also describe the merging of another inclusion article with this. This article is very similar to my third paper.

Added a source from the opposing side for further reading

"Toste, Jessica R.. “The Illusion of Inclusion: How We Are Failing Students with Learning Disabilities”, Oath Inc. (2015). Website.12/11/2017"

Copyeditted article

grammatical changes,clarification of the first paragragh.