User:JakeSturg/sandbox

Keiko Ozato is my article. Reading this article I plan to update the scientific aspect of the article and give details to the general public about what the information is significant for. I may also update the sourcing by deleting one source because the link doesn't work (CBBG Faculty, Dr. Ozato Conferral) and adding a few that may prove valuable.

Page 105 Source 1 in the article. (Personal Life)

3 is best source

Add in "Personal Life" from source 3:


 * The fact that her dad suffering from tuberculosis was a large factor in her interest in immunology. Para. 5.
 * Discovery of IRF8 transcription factor, fights bacteria that causes tuberculosis (simplify in text by adding on in general terms.)
 * BRD 4 protein (^^^)
 * The changes from the opinions of women in science from when she began to today.

Personal Life: Ozato was born in Japan near the beginning of World War II. After the war the entire Japanese culture was destroyed and left the country in shambles. Along with extreme poverty, Ozato's father suffered from tuberculosis which ultimately fueled her interest in immunology.

Peer Review:

This article is well written and easy to follow. I would suggest to add more about what the scientist has contributed to. Peer Review:

The article looks like it is laid out well, I would add more information on what the scientist has contributed to the science community. I would also suggest to add hyperlinks in your article as well.