User:JakeTayon/Adventurous motility/Austinbridges12345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jake Tayon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JakeTayon/Adventurous_motility?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article’s updates overall were very thorough and put together nicely. The only recommendations I would have are to find an additional reference, and flesh out the Lead a little bit to make the overall article a bit more cohesive.