User:JakeTayon/Adventurous motility/Henrrydubon Peer Review

Hi guys! I just peer reviewed your article, so far it's looking great and seems that you have gathered many resources. The only thing I would suggest is to avoid writing etc on the article and maybe be a bit more specific. Still, your article is looking great!

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