User:JakeTayon/Adventurous motility/MichaelYoung72 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JakeTayon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JakeTayon/Adventurous_motility?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article is well written and easy to understand without much background, though it could be beneficial for some readers to add some more information regarding the structure and function of the flagella and cilia. Additionally, it may be helpful for less-involved readers to have an explanation of what it means for organisms to be motile, further, why it is significant that cells have these structures as opposed to not.