User:Jakesonnenberg/Hypertensive disease of pregnancy/Jcevallos1 Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/UCSF_School_of_Medicine/UCSF_SOM_Inquiry_In_Action--_Wikipedia_Editing_(Fall_2021)/articles/edited?showArticle=50848626


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hypertensive disease of pregnancy

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the thoughtful organization, clarity, and reliability of the diagnosis section. If possible, I suggest adding a brief definition of eclampsia in the diagnosis section as well. If you plan to also work on the prognosis section then I would also suggest adding a small bit about the importance of close follow up of the patients BP postpartum because of the increased morbidity that occurs ~1-2 weeks postpartum. As was mentioned in class a short section on general treatment would be nice to see as well. However, it might be okay to just mention baby aspirin for HTN during pregnancy.