User:Jakiya5/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Giveon

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article becuase it has room for improvement and i also like and listen to Giveon's music. My impression of it is about an african american male artist his life and how he became famous.

Evaluate the article
The article starts with expalaing when Giveon was born but not where until explained along with his early life. I think the lead is a bit over deatiled with  what music mad him know and not enough about him in the lead. It isnt until the next paragraph where it explaing who he really is. There is a section of this article that focuses on the first feature he was on with drake alot more then who he is as a person.