User:Jalanielawrence/citing sources

Article Evaluation
Concussions in sport

=== 1. The article seems very broad, but it is broken down into different sports. Everything seems very related to concussions and head injuries. Looking at the talk page, it seems as if the article had near to nothing on the page until people added information. One thing that throws me off is the title. I would edit the title to make the word "sport" plural.

2. The article fails to mention sports outside of United State. However, it does not seem very bias. There are a lot of statistics referenced. There is a section thats called "female sports" and it just seems very out of place, especially since there is no section mention male sports.

3. The statistics definitely need to be updated. There is a table that states policies, under "Prevention Efforts" these policies are not mentioned. The article mentions a lot about incidents that happen, but mentions, to a minimum about preventions.

4. Some the links work very well and seem to be very reliable. There were enough to make me feel confident that the article has was made with an abundance of resources.

5. I see a lot of sentences with references, nothing is mentioned about bias, however. This article states a lot of statistics so readers would assume that the number are factual.

6. The article can be updated. When doing my research, current articles were