User:Jalfield/Charlotte-Catherine Patin/Jalfield Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User is unknown. There is no "assigned to" section for this article.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Charlotte-Catherine Patin (same as the current article - no edits have been made thus far)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Charlotte-Catherine Patin

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

No edits have been made so far by the peer editing this article.

The article would definitely be improved through more verifiable sources because, right now, there is only one reference, and it is only used to cite one sentence of information from the article. The current reference link does work, and it is a verifiable source from a Princeton Library. The current information provided is neutral, and the links to other Wiki pages are very helpful and important. If the content on the page could be organized into different categories, it would be really helpful for people viewing and reading the article! For example, the written works provided in bullet form could have their own section under a general title. The addition of images, if possible, would also be really helpful for people reading the article! The current information is concise and clear, so continuing to add information of this nature, in a more organized way, would make the article much more developed while keeping it easy to follow.