User:Jallenmosby/I-novel/Led234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jallenmosby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jallenmosby/I-novel?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * I-novel

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead- A new lead has not been added however I feel that the current lead is good enough as it its.

Content- Have you already added your writing to the main wiki article? Because the content of your sandbox is the exact same as the current wiki article that is up. The only difference between your sandbox article and the main wiki article is that the main wiki article has citations whereas yours does not, you need to add citations if you have not already done that.

Tone- The tone of the article is good, it feels neutral and presents facts in the article with examples. Again you do need to add citations however.

Sources- You do not have any sources in your sandbox and so you need to add that now. You need to pull from academic sources and make sure you have a wide variety of sources.

Organizations- Your article is well organized and the placement of your subheadings makes sense. I also didn’t see any grammar errors of spelling mistakes so good job.

Overall- I do not see any original content on your wiki page unless you have already posted your content to the wiki page. I also don't see any sources or references or any kind.