User:Jalyn547/Pain scale/Kmcmiche Peer Review

General info
Jalyn547
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jalyn547/Pain scale
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Pain scale

Evaluate the drafted changes
The only edit I see is the deletion of a sentence for plagiarism. Instead of completely deleting the sentence, I feel that it could have been rewritten with a source. It was information on why pain scales are needed, and I believe the information needs to be in the article. Other edits that could be made are grammatical in nature. Specifically, there are many places where unneeded commas come before conjunctions (example in the second sentence of the article). There are physiological infant pain scales, so that information could be added to the chart of scales. Most of the information does not have citations. The addition of citations to the article would be a major contribution. Subheadings for infant and child pain rating scales would be beneficial.