User:Jalyn547/Pain scale/MPHILLI Peer Review

General info
Jalyn547
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jalyn547/Pain scale
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pain scale

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I like the added context in the introduction of the article but also some sources are missing from the paragraph that you added. The article that you. Chose could benefit in having more sections added to it to improve the quality such as the history of pain scales and the most commonly used ones today.

The endometriosis portion of the article could also have more context added to it as it does stand out quite a bit from the rest of the article as it looks out of place. I also think that the section could renamed since normal readers will likely not have a clue on what endometriosis means.The numeric pain scale is also a section that can possibly be expanded on and could have added context to it.