User:JamHGoYangI22/Let's Play (comic)/Wikientry01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JamHGoYangI22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JamHGoYangI22/Let's Play (comic)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Let's Play (comic)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * I love how you added an extra segment to this article explaining the interview of the author of this comic.
 * Your lead includes information that is not in the article, the interview was made before this article.
 * Since the article you cited has more information, you should try and add more on the prospect of how she was inspired to make the comic.
 * Your content is neutral and unbias.
 * For your picture, maybe add the author since I haven't seen her image on the actual article.