User:JamesLhistorian/Occupational dust exposure/BazzerAHightower Peer Review

You've done some good work and added some really good stuff! I like how it is straightforward. I like the bulleted list of examples and such as well. I think as you keep finding stuff and adding it on it will come out great. If I had to make a suggestion, I would say to add some more meat and explanation in some of the sections, especially the opening section, as well as the health and epidemiology section. BazzerAHightower (talk) 18:19, 1 April 2024 (UTC)