User:JamesS&T3530/History of hospitals/Kelton T Back Peer Review

General info
I am reviewing JamesS&T3530's work on the history of hospitals.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:JamesS&T3530/History of hospitals - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):History of hospitals - Wikipedia

Content
Antiseptics, anesthetics, and Germ Theory are all very relevant topics to the field of medicine and would definitely be implemented in hospitals. However, I would like some more specific examples of how these methods of pain management and enhanced views on the spread of disease were implemented in hospitals. For example, your partner has very good examples of the first use of x-rays by doctors to treat patients, as well as how the Glasgow Royal Infirmary became the first hospital with a radiology department.

I do see you do not yet have anything under 19th century medicine. I don't know if you've found anything yet related to that time, or if you plan on scraping that section. Hopefully you do have something, or can easily find it, to put in that section.

Organization
I think you can organize your headers better. You start off with '20th and 21st Centuries', then move on to '19th Century', then move onto '20th Century', and there is no 21st Century section to behold. Personally, I would rewrite the first header to 'Modern Medicine' to make it dissimilar from the following headers, but similar enough that it's still relevant to the lecture at hand. Also, do you plan on adding material to the 19th Century section? I would specify that in the lead or get rid of that section if you don't plan on adding anything.

Tone and Balance
Your tone looks pretty good, presenting the information as it is and not putting any point of view in the language. I would see if there are any positions on the hurdles antiseptics, anesthetics, and Germ Theory might have faced to become a major part of medicine, however, especially in the case of Germ Theory.

Images
Finding some images of old antiseptics and/or anesthetics would be cool, like old advertisements for medicinal Cocaine (that's also another good place you could do some research).