User:Jameshu1/Husky Union Building/Juliettelm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jameshu1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jameshu1/Husky_Union_Building?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Husky Union Building

Lead
Well done! I can see you updated the lead section to reflect what you added to the article. It's all well written and concise. I would recommend defining the sections in your article and adding introductory section (maybe include the first paragraph of your draft in the introductory section).

Content
The content you added is relevant and on-topic and up-to-date. However, I do think you could add more information about the HUB and how it relates to UW in general. I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors either.


 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? - I didn't see this addressed in your article, maybe see if there's a way you could incorporate this.

Tone and Balance
The tone you used for your writing is neutral and encyclopedic, sticks to the facts which is good.

Sources and References
As far as sources, I think you could find more sources so you could add more information. Maybe there are some articles that mention the HUB or events in the HUB that you could include in an "events" section of the article.

Organization

 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Like I mentioned for the lead section, if you distinguish different sections in your article it might work a little better. Consider adding headings like "History" or "Background" or "Events" to the article. If you go on the HUB website, they organize it into sections in the navigation menu on the top of the screen, maybe you could organize your article into sections like that. An idea could be adding a section on games or entertainment and then showing images of the bowling alley or gaming room and expanding on that a little more.

Images and Media
I noticed there are a few images on the article, however, I think you could add more photos of the inside of the HUB or features that it has (and designate them to sections in the article).

Overall impressions
Overall I really like your article! I think overall just going more in-depth on things that the HUB has to offer would be good for this article (and adding photos, more descriptions and more sources). You did a great job including information about the HUB and I'm looking forward to seeing how the final turns out and seeing it all come to life!