User:Jameshu1/Husky Union Building/Steph.tsaii Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jameshu1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jameshu1/Husky_Union_Building?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Husky Union Building

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked the information you added to the article! One thing that I would pay more attention to is the neutral view of the content. Some descriptions such as "a place for student engagement, and to improve students experience" may sound a bit bias. I would also include some of the most recent stores or services at the HUB, and possibly more sources. I think that there are also some run on sentences, so maybe take a look at it. Overall, I think this is a great introduction of the HUB!