User:Jamesmarg/Venus' flower basket/Johnkim5206 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

James Sixkiller


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jamesmarg/Venus%27_flower_basket?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Venus' flower basket

Evaluate the drafted changes
The additional information that you added provides a more detailed overview of the Venus' flower basket.

Specifically, I like how you described which depths of the deep sea Venus' flower baskets are found in. I also like how you added more information on drag by talking about a "study by Italian researcher" in the morphology section. But I would just recommend adding a citation in this section because you add new information but there is no reference to the source. Also, this is a minor correction but the last sentence of the morphology section wasn't a complete sentence: "Additionally, making feeding more efficient for the shrimp living inside of its lattice"

Although I like your last sentence in the Anthropomorphic Applications section, I would add just another sentence or two about how exactly the flower basket structure and Norman Foster's design are similar.

Overall, I think your edits to the article provide a better understanding on its applications, morphology and habitat. Great job!