User:Jamesmarg/Venus' flower basket/Kjeag11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Victoria S Gonzalez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jamesmarg/Venus' flower basket
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Venus' flower basket

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise but contains key aspects to set the background of Venus' flower basket. It also contains interesting points of why humans are specifically interested in this glass sponge. The content of the article is all relevant to the topic of Venus' flower basket with sections for habitat, morphology, and anthropomorphic applications. Victoria said she worked mostly on the morphology section which included a neutral tone. However, I am unsure how much was written from the original article, but the morphology section needs citations to support the information/evidence being presented. The list of sources so far seems extensive and to include a variety of authors, but there are no links related to the sources if someone wanted to find out more/read the research papers. I think for further improvements would be to incorporate citations throughout the morphology section specifically. The images also add to this section to help the reader see what the glass structure looks like. Overall good start!