User:Jamesrjb7/2021 Kenyan constitutional referendum attempt/Owen.maier Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jamesrjb7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jamesrjb7/2021_Kenyan_constitutional_referendum_attempt?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2021 Kenyan constitutional referendum attempt

Evaluate the drafted changes
Generally, I think this is an extremely thorough, well cited, well structured article that clearly takes the reader through the context of the referendum, the process of its amendment passing, as well as all the challenges that it faced along the way. It's very neutral which I love and just states the facts about this entire process, with no obvious bias towards one side or another. The only thing I would ask about is putting citations in text for the paragraphs about the High Court and Court of Appeal Ruling. I also wonder if the content of the Amendment is necessary, or would be better served to create a separate page. This is maybe a future project, but could streamline the article a bit. Nevertheless, well done James!