User:Jameststurner/Erased de Kooning Drawing/Yayun Zheng Peer Review

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User:Jameststurner


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 * User:Jameststurner/Erased de Kooning Drawing


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 * Erased de Kooning Drawing

Evaluate the drafted changes
Greetings,

Lead
This paragraph clearly introduces the origin of this artwork, but there are still materials that need to be supplemented. You can try to find out the materials to supplement.

Content
Your article looks more like a story, for example:"Rauschenberg was decided to approach William De Kooning and asked him for a drawing which he could erasePrepared for De Kooning to refuse the request, which would have made the work a performance piece."This is my idea "Rauschenberg asked William De Kooning for an erasable painting asa performance piece on the premise that itMight be rejected. "What do you think?