User:JamonicaLewis/Substance abuse prevention/Chanda10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JamonicaLewis


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JamonicaLewis/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Substance abuse prevention

Evaluate the drafted changes
My initial advice would be to create a Bibliography for your sandbox article, I did not see one. I also had trouble locating your edits to the article in your sand box. In the original article there is a section listed as School Preventions. You could add some information about the D.A.R.E project they do alot with elementary, middle, and high school aged children to promote drug awarness. You could also go into Mental disorders that are induced by susbstance abuse and waht would be some prevenative ways to do that. Chanda

Thank you for your feedback I will look into adding information about the D.A.R.E project I honestly wasn't aware they helped with kids in those age ranges. i will definitely take a note of that and I'm glad you notified me that my edits aren't visual I will be working on that ASAP-Jamonicalewis