User:Jand1990/Stress (biology)/Anoshah04 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jand1990


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jand1990/Stress (biology)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stress (biology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I really like your draft so far. The lead is very informative, as you give a very detailed and thorough definition of stress and what is it caused by. I like that you included a brief outline of some of the points that you will touch on throughout the article such as symptoms of stress, ways to relieve stress, etc. This is all very useful and relevant information that will definitely pertain to the readers. Some constructive criticism I have is that you should try using content that is directly from either journals or scholarly articles to make sure that the information is reliable. Maybe you could also try including a few pictures throughout the article, as it would be a nice visual aid for the reader. Overall, nice job! I can't wait to see the finished product!