User:Jand1990/Stress (biology)/Avengers2015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jand1990


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jand1990/Stress_%28biology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stress (biology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I really like the stuffs you have added to your sandbox. I think your lead include a description but is not in brief. I would suggest you to add little bit more into your lead. In your sandbox in the additional notes section i think you added the stuffs you want to edit. It looks good but I think you just added the main topic line, i would suggest you to add more information about the topics. i think you need to to organize the stuffs you want edit organized. Apart of all this your content looks good, I would suggest you to add some more stuff to your additional notes before editing.