User:JaneYin/Calcite/Yibofeng3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Janeyin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JaneYin/Calcite - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Calcite - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead section

The content of the article is clear and detailed. This article provides a comprehensive overview of calcite's properties, uses, and potential impacts of climate change on its production and applications. A list of the distribution of calcite in various countries is also given. Let readers understand calcite more directly. The article only mentions that calcite can be used to make scaffolds in bone tissue engineering and paper industry, it is suggested to improve this article by including more examples of uses and applications of calcite in various industries.

Structure

The structure of the article is clear and straightforward, and the content mentioned in the article is based on sufficient research and facts and is relatively accurate. No grammatical or spelling errors. Most of the content of the article is based on facts, so it may lack some of my own opinions and reasons. It is recommended to provide some of your own opinions and reasons for calcite, and find some evidence that can support your point of view to improve this article.

Neutrality

This article appears to be neutral and expresses no personal views or prejudices. The information provided in the article is basically based on facts and does not express any critical opinions.

Source

The article cites some good resources. Most of them come from scientific journals and government websites, so these sources are reliable and trustworthy. In addition, the resource includes some information related to calcite, such as its properties and environmental impact. The content in these resources is very comprehensive.

Suggestions for improvement


 * Articles can contain more examples of uses and applications of calcite
 * The author could use some of own opinions and suggestions to discuss the environmental impacts of calcite mining and how to mitigate them, and use some evidence to support the views