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If I had created Nakam first, I would have been sure to add more information and include photos regarding the topic at hand. Also, I would've added references for the information provided in the article to ensure the reader that plagiarism has been avoided and reliable sources have been used. The writer of this article has included no references and barely any information regarding the matter. Therefore, if I were the second reader, I would have edited the article by implementing the ideas I have mentioned previously. The most important two being the addition of information and references to reliable sources. For example, if you take a look at Nakam from 2019, you will notice that the expectations for a paper like this are a lot more complex. There is a substantial amount of information associated with the appropriate references along with a few photos to aid with visualization.

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Coffeeshop (Netherlands) I edited this page by adding in a citation. The edit was needed because the page needed to be updated and needed citations for verifiability.

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I would like a video or a draft on canvas explaining the format, and I would also find it helpful if we were able to portion a short period of time in the seminars for question asking.