User:Jar07016/Bay cat/Andy.thompson33 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jar07016


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jar07016/Bay_cat?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bay cat

Evaluate the drafted changes
The revisions that this person made were a lot about the population size and the location of the Bay Cat. The information that was used in the revision was good as it added to the article about were and size of the Bay Cat. Maybe adding more diversity into the information such as foods they eat or about the conservation efforts some people are taking in order to save this species. The sources used were both scientific journals which is good because the journals have concrete examples and backing when it comes to the information said within. The author should add more about the significance the trappers and traders have on the population of the Bay Cat's because that would be an interesting topic to read about. Overall, I think that the information added was good, but if more specific information was added it would make the Wikipedia page much better.