User:Jared.r.wilson-2/Trading post/Eliseleroi Peer Review

Your article is looking good so far! I like the addition of the "historical events" section because the original article is lacking historical context, so your addition really helps to give the article some context. My only suggestion would be to add the date that Jacob Astor founded the AFC to keep it consistent with the other paragraphs and give the reader a better sense of the timeline.

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